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Tuesday, July 17, 2012

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lswgirl13 said...
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD C.J. I DON'T CARE THAT YOU HAVE A JOB AND A FAMILY AND A LIFE . . . WHERE THE HELL IS CHAPTER 2????
I swear, it's coming... how about every Friday, you get a new chapter? That's what I was aiming for. 

According to emails and comments the story line must include:
GO Station Parking Garage
A bike
Hitching of breath
Sex on the train
Some gagging (you people are dirty. Very, very, very dirty)
Very descriptive sex
Drunk people on trains

Don't know what I'm talking about? Read Chapter One

9 comments:

AllanVS said...

If you can - in some way, shape, or form - include them talking in Klingon, Romulan, or Vulcan, I may just read your story. :D

C.J. Smith said...

Challenge accepted.

ExGOnowTTC said...

Another challenge. Try and squeeze in a bizarre sub-plot that goes nowhere but might be connected to the main story. Bonus points if it contains David Icke and the Lizard People - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/David_icke.

C.J. Smith said...

Um ...
Not so sure...

Svej said...

This is going to be amazing. I can feel it.

lswgirl13 said...

NOOOO, don't tarnish the storyline. Unless of course you want to add me in as an older woman from Armani's past!!! I see a bright future for you writing smut.

TomW said...

Certain things must be "throbbing". That's an absolute.

deepfish said...

You need a soundtrack...

AllanVS said...

Oooh ... a Klingon Sex Scene!LoL