Tuesday, July 17, 2012

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lswgirl13 said...
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD C.J. I DON'T CARE THAT YOU HAVE A JOB AND A FAMILY AND A LIFE . . . WHERE THE HELL IS CHAPTER 2????
JULY 17, 2012 2:31 PM 
I swear, it's coming... how about every Friday, you get a new chapter? That's what I was aiming for. 

According to emails and comments the story line must include:
GO Station Parking Garage
A bike
Hitching of breath
Sex on the train
Some gagging (you people are dirty. Very, very, very dirty)
Very descriptive sex
Drunk people on trains

Don't know what I'm talking about? Read Chapter One

9 comments:

  1. AllanVSJuly 17, 2012 at 3:07 PM

    If you can - in some way, shape, or form - include them talking in Klingon, Romulan, or Vulcan, I may just read your story. :D

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  2. C.J. SmithJuly 17, 2012 at 3:15 PM

    Challenge accepted.

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    1. AllanVSJuly 19, 2012 at 8:46 AM

      Oooh ... a Klingon Sex Scene!LoL

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  3. ExGOnowTTCJuly 17, 2012 at 3:36 PM

    Another challenge. Try and squeeze in a bizarre sub-plot that goes nowhere but might be connected to the main story. Bonus points if it contains David Icke and the Lizard People - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/David_icke.

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  4. C.J. SmithJuly 17, 2012 at 3:48 PM

    Um ...
    Not so sure...

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  5. SvejJuly 17, 2012 at 4:20 PM

    This is going to be amazing. I can feel it.

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  6. lswgirl13July 17, 2012 at 4:30 PM

    NOOOO, don't tarnish the storyline. Unless of course you want to add me in as an older woman from Armani's past!!! I see a bright future for you writing smut.

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  7. TomWJuly 18, 2012 at 10:12 AM

    Certain things must be "throbbing". That's an absolute.

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  8. deepfishJuly 18, 2012 at 8:25 PM

    You need a soundtrack...

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